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Unbeknown to them, life was about to change. Life between a man who had lost his soul, and a lady who was about to capture it, She would take the soul from the devil, and caress it from afar. His... more

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  • 98 of 98 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    Level 9 torr

    Member since 29/08/2002

    Reviews written: 347

    User recommends the product

    Advantages Advantages Two fairy tales for the price of one

    Disadvantages Disadvantages One fairy tale for the length of two

    In his room under the eaves of the old farmhouse, Jack sat listening to the drips as the rain trickled through the leaking thatch. The roof was overdue for repair. Everything in the old farmhouse was overdue for repair. He shrugged. The leaks wouldn't really matter so long as the damp didn't seep into the worn, archaic wiring. He shuddered at the memory of the time when the rats had gnawed through the cable in the barn. Then his computer had crashed without warning and he'd lost a set of unsaved spreadsheets that had taken him days to compile. With so little spare time after he had finished ... more
  • 44 of 44 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    Level 7 docpov

    Member since 10/04/2004

    Reviews written: 127

    5 Stars Changes 12/08/2005
    User recommends the product

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    The view from Grace's flat window was nothing special; in fact it was downright depressing. All she could see were more of the same featureless high rise blocks of flats as she lived in herself, obscured by the rain running slowly down the glass. The grey heavy clouds and pouring rain only added to the grim and uninviting outlook but it was all she had. She was a prisoner in her own home, forgotten by the outside world, alone and lonely. Turning from the window she moved her wheelchair back into the deeper gloom of her world, those four rooms that made up her entire existence. Pushing her way ... more
  • 49 of 49 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    Level 5 mr-zeeman

    Member since 22/02/2003

    Reviews written: 51

    User recommends the product

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    Once upon a time, Rose rose early … habitually, every single weekday morning. Indeed it wasn't uncommon for her to be seen leaving the house before dawn ... particularly if Dawn had been out partying the night before, and had returned home the worse for drink. Rose struggled into her burgundy cagoule and fastened the toggles of the hood tightly under her chin. Not for nothing had she earned the knick-name 'Little Red Riding Hoodie'. The tiny emaciated care-worker carefully wheeled her bicycle along the icy garden path, before mounting it and peddling frantically uphill in the wrong gear ... more
  • 25 of 25 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    steffiw

    User doesn't recommend the product

    Advantages Advantages It was fun

    Disadvantages Disadvantages It's very long and It might be a bit rubbish

    Thank you to Elffriend for starting this one off, it was fun. And thank you to Torr for inspiring me so much with his entry. And apologies for the length! Tiny bubbles of sweat, like little glass beads, formed on Cindy's forehead as she leaned closer to the flame. The beads coalesced and slid slowly downward, making thin pink rivulets through the dark sooty smudges coating her cheeks. The flame danced in petrol shades of blue, pink, red and yellow as she took a breath and placed the blow hose between heat chapped lips. Exhaling slowly and evenly, she twirled the pole, watching intently as the ... more
  • 68 of 68 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    Elffriend

    User recommends the product

    Advantages Advantages A chance for writers to adapt thier skills.

    Disadvantages Disadvantages Only limited by imagination.

    A few weeks back I asked Ciao to introduce this category for several reasons. My first idea was to take a fairy tale and adapt it to modern-day stories thinking this would be a challenging experience for many of the excellent writers on Ciao. My second reason was to allow people from different cultures to share their own folk stories with us. My third and maybe more important reason was to see if a writer could come up with a story to suit the times in which we live. I am sure that many people learned a love of reading and writing through the old fairy tales some grim and dark, others full of ... more

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