There are some books, where after I have read them, I am compelled to consult my bookshelves and re-read another book that echoes the plot or style of the one I have just read.
After reading ‘Birdsong’, I re-read ‘All Quiet on the Western Front’. One of these, I concluded, is a great novel and the other I’m afraid, just falls short of greatness.
It is 1910, and Stephen Wraysford is visiting a small town in France on business. He stays with a local textile entrepreneur and his family, the Azaires’. During his stay he falls in love with Madam Azaire, and she reciprocates the feeling. They elope, but through guilt, fear and an unexpected pregnancy Madam Azaire runs away to her sister’s and Stephen is left with a proverbial broken heart. His life dramatically changes when war is declared and he enlists to join the British Army and fights on the front line in Flanders.
As a distraction to the events of war, halfway through the novel the time leaps to 1978, where the narrative describes Elizabeth Benson’s search for the identity and history of here Grandfather who fought in the First World War. It isn’t surprising to learn that her Grandfather was Stephen Wraysford. And the sporadic interjections of her search complete the essential backbone of the plot.
You can probably guess what most of the 500 pages of this novel describe throughout, as it is essentially a ‘war
novel’. Most is certainly not intended for the faint-hearted, as Faulks graphically describes life in the trenches that is now so notorious of this particular war.
Faulks’ characterisation of Stephen is to be congratulated upon. He’ s a lonely man when, like many during the time, circumstance and terror change his life. It is often easy to recognise and understand how his feelings develop and his detachment from his fellow soldiers and the world outside. He’s an atypical anti-hero who (unlike many of the other character’s within the novel who despise and fear the war) merely welcomes it and thrives on its hardships in an almost masochistic way.
The additional characters that Faulks creates are exceptionally broad and an integral part of the development of the story. One of these, Jack Firebrace is a tunneller and Faulks dedicates a few chapters to Jack’s thoughts and life in the trenches. Again a character that offers a different perspective to the narrative than that of Stephen Wraysford, Jack has left behind a wife and sick child in London. It quickly becomes apparent that the person that others perceive him as and his own personality are of conflicting versions of the same man. An extrovert in public; always the one to provide entertainment for the others. The private reality is his fear of not seeing his son again, his loss of faith in humanity and his devotion to the men who surround him. In a heartfelt moment whilst he watches in horror as the soldiers go ‘over the top’ during a futile and pointless offensive all he can say is “Boys, boys…Oh my poor boys”. It is the contrast between Stephen and Jack that Faulks uses to demonstrate just how indifferent Stephen and the others are to what they have to do and what Jack sees as the futility of their occupation.
I am somewhat bemused by Faulks’ use of Elizabeth Brown’s narrative in finding out about Stephen Wraysford 60 years later. It is certainly common for members of a generation to want to know about relatives who participated in these events, but I feel that Elizabeth’s story doesn’t integrate very well into the novel.
Firstly, her mother knew her father but Elizabeth doesn’t ask her about him, and Faulks doesn’t really give a credible explanation of why this is. Instead Elizabeth goes about translating Stephen’s old notebooks that he wrote in a secret language, and tries to find out about his army career in contacting the Army and finding any men who served with him. However, despite this the parts in the novel devoted to Elizabeth’s discoveries are somewhat short and hurried and it isn’t until halfway through the novel that she is introduced as a part of the story at all. By this time, I was left in no uncertainty that this was going to be less off a detective exercise for the reader and more of a focus of Elizabeth’s shortcomings in her life.
A novel’s ending is imperative to its overall impact, and unfortunately ‘Birdsong’ does not end on a particularly good note. Well, actually it does in the sense that there is the story of an unlikely rescuer and a birth, so it does. However, I would have felt more satisfied by not reading the last fifty or so pages and it ending on a more neutral footing than the saccharine-sweet one that Faulks has written. I can see Hollywood possibly making this into a film without having to change the ending to suit the tearful, but relieved audiences coming out of the cinemas afterwards. Of course, it isn’t just left as positively wonderful as that. I was left in no doubt whatsoever that the war had changed lives, and even on Armistice Day the casualties didn’t stop. Those who ‘survived’ in the ‘not dying’ sense had to live with what they had seen, the people they’d become and the reality of life outside the trenches.
And in comparison to ‘All Quiet on the Western Front’?
Faulks’ contribution is essentially another powerful perspective of the First World War, with many wonderful descriptions and a hard hitting reality of the futility of warfare. However to me, the inclusion of the modern day sub-plot failed to inspire me beyond what I already felt for Stephen’s story during the war. It has to be noted that the novel was published in the 90’s, and is therefore not from first-hand experience, although I suspect that as Faulks was a journalist he would have researched the subject heavily without just relying on textbook history and other works of fiction.
‘All Quiet on the Western Front’ however was written by a survivor of the war, Erich Maria Remarque, albeit not published until 1963. As I said previously, ‘Birdsong’ reminded me of this novel and I had to read it again to see the similarities, apart from the fact that ‘All Quiet on the Western Front’ is written from a German point of view. In fact, once I’d finished it, I felt that Faulks’ novel did resemble what I had read by Remarque, however simplistic you’d regard his novel to be. But Faulks’ has elaborated in his own style to create more rounded characters and a plot that would make a more original piece. I don’t mean this as criticism but merely something I noticed.
I find it difficult to rate Faulks’ novel. Without the modern interjections, or if Elizabeth Brown’s narrative had been embedded deeper into the novel, I would have loved it. It is an exceptional novel that succeeds in portraying the full horrors of war and how it effects people in different ways, but with my disappointment with the ending I can only recommend it with some reservations.
But maybe I’m just being my usual cynical self…
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I entirely agree. The modern "parallel" theme is trite and adds nothing. All the impact of the book is in the descriptions of trench warfare, and the underground tunnelling in particular - I still feel claustrophobic remembering it. Trying to add extra dimensions detracts from rather than enhances this impact.
sit2020 16.05.2002 11:05
A good opinion on what seems a rather unusual novel, I doubt I will go looking for a copy in a bookshop but might pay a visit to the local library.
alflavor 15.05.2002 21:35
Not sure this book would be my cup of tea, but sounds good! Useful review, AL
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Readers who are entranced by sweeping historical sagas will devour Birdsong, Sebastian ... more
Faulks' drama set during the first world war. There's even a little high-toned erotica thrown into the mix to convince the doubtful. The book's hero, a 20-year-old E...
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Readers who are entranced by sweeping historical sagas will devourBirdsong, Sebastian ... more
Faulks' drama set during the first world war. There's even a little high-toned erotica thrown into the mix to convince the doubtful. The book's hero, a 20-year-old En...
Postage & Packaging: £2.75 Availability: Usually dispatched within 1-2 business days...
Readers who are entranced by sweeping historical sagas will devour Birdsong, Sebastian ... more
Faulks' drama set during the first world war. There's even a little high-toned erotica thrown into the mix to convince the doubtful. The book's hero, a 20-year-old E...
Postage & Packaging: £2.75 Availability: Usually dispatched within 1-2 business days...