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This is my first poem so im seeing how it goes. Im not sure if i have entered it in the right category so if i havnt im sorry. All opinions on my 'effort' are greatly recieved.
Dont Change Stay forever young, wild and free Dont stop Doing and being what you want to be Dont start Doing what people want you to do Dont forget To always just be you
It is a very short poem but i just wanted to see if i had even a sparkle of talent before i reamed off more to the poor unsuspecting public. I am open to criticism so give it to me if you wish. If not then thanx! I appreciate your comments anyway.
Thankyou for taking the Ciao poetry challenge. Rachel :0).
Elffriend 14.05.2004 01:41
I write and review loads of poetry, this was a nice start . Sometimes short and sweet is the best. There are several poetry sections on Ciao, the challenge is for the best poem. If you intend to write more, take another look, poetry in general is the best place to start. Hope that helps. Love Lisax