Advantages Erm, good rhyme scheme!
Disadvantages Corny rhyme scheme
This is my first poem so im seeing how it goes. Im not sure if i have entered it in the right category so if i havnt im sorry. All opinions on my 'effort' are greatly recieved.Dont Change
It is a very short poem but i just wanted to see if i had even a sparkle of talent before i reamed off more to the poor unsuspecting public. I am open to criticism so give it to me if you wish. If not then thanx! I appreciate your comments anyway.
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