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Just Dont 11 of 11 Ciao Users found the following review helpful
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Advantages Erm, good rhyme scheme!

Disadvantages Corny rhyme scheme

This is my first poem so im seeing how it goes. Im not sure if i have entered it in the right category so if i havnt im sorry. All opinions on my 'effort' are greatly recieved.

Dont Change
Stay forever young, wild and free
Dont stop
Doing and being what you want to be
Dont start
Doing what people want you to do
Dont forget
To always just be you

It is a very short poem but i just wanted to see if i had even a sparkle of talent before i reamed off more to the poor unsuspecting public. I am open to criticism so give it to me if you wish. If not then thanx! I appreciate your comments anyway.

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  • Jordon 29/07/2004 17:49
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    Nice short and sweet - Jayne x

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    Thankyou for taking the Ciao poetry challenge. Rachel :0).

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