Advantages It should hopefully make you think!!
Disadvantages A bit long
There are certain times of sadness when a little spark of happiness enters your mind and finds its way to your heart; your heart shakes up your brain and in a state of half slumber, the latter responds: "Yes, I knew this all the time..."MOMENTS
From so much repeating to myself
That life has not treated me well,
I forgot about the fact,
That I had not been very fair to life either;
Opportunities snatched away by fear,
Or opportunities that I have wasted,
From sheer laziness of acting;
Not having known how to choose.
Moments in which, I surprise myself breathing,
And feel as though I were touching my own life;
Like a light spirit that inhabits and fascinates me,
And with whom I daily find myself trying to familiarise.
Underneath this throbbing wound,
I can guess my fragile imperfection;
Wicked witch's soup, on the eternal point of explosion;
It's like aspiring to tame a beast,
Managing to control one's own self;
It's like being the apprentice of a wise wizard,
Who dangerously guides us to the point of madness,
Before opening the only window,
Through which, we will be able to free ourselves.
Perhaps that may be the error,
Of wanting to hold back instead of admiring,
What time renders unreachable, untouchable, inaccessible;
The moment is like a wave of the ocean.
A permanent state of vigilance,
An undressing of the constant preoccupation,
Of finding the solution to the problems,
Which turn us into threads, in the fabric of our own dissolution.
There is something unintelligible.
There is something which evades my comprehension;
But it is something unquestionable,
Because only my heart can perceive it.
I gather them like a treasure and I do not lock them up,
As they have no point of concretion;
They are like jigsaw puzzles,
Made up of snippets of pure perception.
These awakening moments,
When a smile matters a thousand times more than any declaration,
These amazing moments,
Creators of the most beautiful song,
They are when my gardens blossom,
And the only thing that explodes,
Is the most intensely pure,
Incredibly gentle and genuine emotion.
PS: If anyone finds in this any improper use of the english language, please do let me know.
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