A Double Dose Of Passion
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POEM ONE - c) KarenUK, 2003
SlowlySoft
skin
melting
Time
doesn’t
matter
irresistible feelings
spurring onwards
frantic touching
pulling closer
hearts beat faster
urging pleasure
sliding bodies
needing more
Slowly
Softly
Snuggling
Cuddling
Resisting temptation
If only to sleep
A brush of hand, of skin on skin
The closeness, promise, veiled so thin
The room blurs around us, we are but two
Our senses heightened, our passion grew
We touched so long, I needed to
Feel all your body, find all of you
To hold you tight and love you well
To live you, breathe you, feel you swell
Our bodies moved together then
I lost track of all time and when
The morning sun disturbed our night
I felt aggrieved, no strength to fight
We moved together, as if possessed
Our height of joy, we never guessed
Would be so great, and yet the fall
Is the undoing of us all.
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Wow! Two very different but very good bits of poetry there. At a pinch I prefer the second, it seems somehow more intimate, less abstract. Love it! Effy x x x