♥♥Sorry I havent been around much lately but I'm really busy at home and work and uni so...
♥♥Sorry I havent been around much lately but I'm really busy at home and work and uni so will catch up soon. Take care. Jayne x x♥♥
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I know that this should probably be under the poetry category but because I've already written a review under this category it kept coming up with edit review as appose to writing a new review. I couldn't figure this one out so if anyone knows how to sort that please let me know for future reference. Anyone I've put it under P. obviously for poetry and here are a few more of my poems that I've written over the years. Hope you all enjoy them and any constructive criticism would be welcomed.
Here it goes....
Mummy <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I'll hold you in my arms I'll rock you til you sleep I feed you when you you're hungry and I'll kiss you when you weep But when I am alone with time to sit and ponder I'll think about your pretty face and the life that you have yonder
Mum's in Demand <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Your made just right for hugging Heart big to give us loving Cheeks soft for all our kissing Strong for when we went missing Lips smooth to soothe our pain Patience when we did it again A big purse for when we ran out A big house when friends are about A big bosom when we need rest You're definitely the best We love you more than you'll ever know More than we can ever show One thing I think we all find funny Is just how much we need our Mummy!
For Baby <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 'Hello there I'm your Mummy You spent the last 9 months in my tummy Wriggling, Kicking and turning For your birth I have been yearning Now you lay snuggling my breast I've forgotten the pain and all the rest Because you're my baby that I adore I'll look after you forever more.'
Obviously the above are on one specific theme and the one below is just a bit of rambling on my part.
Writers block <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sitting here looking for a story to tell Never had this before Always done so well Wonder why I'm wondering Staring at the clock So is this what the greats call The evil writers block
Needing inspiration, reading other work Get myself some caffeine Give myself a perk If I have nothing to say Why do I try Because my poems mean so much to me Sometimes I want to cry
Other poems are feelings Come from deep, deep down So this one is meaningless I realise with a frown As I wait for the door knock (My boyfriend's coming round) I decide to finish for the day This evil writer's block!!
I hope you enjoyed reading these, as i said before any criticism would be welcomed as long as its not just nasty comments but I know you friendly ciaoers wouldnt do that to me!!
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Tadders 23.08.2005 18:29
These are great. Not sure I'd have the guts to put my poetry on the site. Maybe one day!
jacpuss 17.08.2005 23:05
would good poetry,have you considered taking it up full time? i enjoyed reading that,and said in only a way a mother can. lol jacquie xxxx
LeeroyBrown 10.07.2005 10:34
Poetry is not really my thing, I am more a music man (not to be confused with The Musicman) however I would say that it is a good way to express how you feel about something, someone or a situation and that is loud and clear from your first few poems. Leeroy ~Onwards and Upwards~
May 7th, 2005
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