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Advantages A very entertaining and thought provoking read.

Disadvantages Many would be put off by the science fiction label.

Consider a planet floating against the blackness of space. A planet with oceans and many islands all covered in luxurious foliage. A planet with only a mild tropical climate. Allow the eye to zoom in, through the clouds to a small clearing in the verdant foliage. Here lying in a hammock is an old man, one Cerne Obrien who has just been struck by a sudden realisation that he is dying.

Once long ago Obrien was a freelance prospector who made a lucky strike and on his way to cash in had a malfunction with his ship. It crashed on this planet where he found a group of humans who had also been stranded from a colony ship that had also crashed. This planet was off the main space lanes so no rescue was ever undertaken because nobody ever knew the fate of these missing peoples. They have been living here for a great many years and have adapted to the planet.

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Visually this world is a paradise. Spectacular scenery; wide, sweeping sandy beaches, lush jungle but there is a serpent in this paradise. This world wasn't designed for humans, even the gorgeous flowers will wilt at a humans touch. This world has very little that humans can eat. Only one sea monster, which is loaded with toxins and has to be laboriously prepared for over a day and a night, is their major source of food. Once prepared though it is a spectacular taste. The natives have no concept of storing foods as they live on the knife edge of starvation all the time. Conversely there is nothing on this planet that wants to eat humans either. Native predators leave them strictly alone. But there are poisoned thorns and deadly bacteria waiting for the incautious. It's still very easy to die here with a 100% mortality rate for certain illnesses.

Obrien, who is referred to with respect as The Langri, wants to save this world. He has lived and seen five generations grow to maturity. He has descendants a plenty. He can foresee a time when other men will come. Men with strange weapons. Men with buildings that would stretch high into the air. Men who would swim in the sea and introduce strange poisons. Men who would take and force the natives into the mountains where there was no food for them.

So he had prepared The Plan. Once he was prepared to undertake the defence of the planet but can no longer do so. Now the brightest and best of the younger generation are to be laboriously tutored in all manner of subjects so that they will be able to face the inevitable day when somebody will try and take their world away. One to learn law, one mathematics etc. They also learn the galactic language as well as their own. These are very intelligent people.

The main humans are two sets of couples, one from the world and one newly arrived. Opposing them is the developer. The natives are Forni, a great etc grandson of the Langri and Della a young woman he loves and who loves him. They were to have been a married couple when the crisis came. They have put off their developing relationship until this situation has been sorted out.
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