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Not anywhere near as good as the other poems and verses written on here but thought i'd give it a crack!

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I joined this place 2 weeks ago and really have to say
It's a cracking place to come sometimes and have a little play
Ive not made a lot of money but that's why I have a job
Otherwise it'd be all reviews and I'd become the biggest slob

My reviews are works in progress cos helpfuls all I get
Ive not found my writing rhythm to get a big E yet
Im sure by reading all your reviews I'll have a little clue
Of whats required for me to write to get and E from you

Im glad I found this little site ironically called Ciao
Cos it takes up all my waking hours and im not really sure how
My guestbooks got some comments to give me a little shove
And write about my passions and the things I truly love

I appreciate your honesty about the things I find to write
It also gives me things to read when im working through the night
Don't tell my boss im on here cos he'd really be quite mad
Maybe I should recommend him as a friend and it might not be that bad

Ive read so many poems and I thought it turn for me
Although its not the greatest its for all of you to see
So just as I close this message and use some more time at work
I appreciate the laughs and jokes and the odd cheeky little quirk


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  • arnoldhenryrufus 04/04/2007 18:42
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    a nice little poem - lyn x

  • digitalenvironmentalist 27/03/2007 19:57
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    sliced with fun and real sides of life. good luck. rey

  • beccie 26/07/2006 08:47
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  • andys1stopshop 24/02/2006 23:56
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    i just loved it. thats all i can say Andy

  • Averilla 19/02/2006 02:00
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