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Placing my palm on your bare chest, I feel the soft flicker of your heart. I smile and remember its fierce pounding against mine, only Last night ago. We pledged to belong to each other Now and Forevermore, Husband and Wife invariably intertwined. I watch you sleep and wonder- ... Read review

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The Morning After

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"Placing my palm on your bare chest, I feel the soft flicker of your heart. I smile and remember its fierce pounding against mine, only Last night ago. We pledged to belong to each other Now and Forevermore, Husband and Wife invariably intertwined. I watch you sleep and wonder- Where has my heart been hiding all this time? At that moment I knew that life had held us at bay to find each other. Our life together will hold many ..." Read review
21.05.2010

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A Poem

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"...seem to be is blue But poems aren't my strength, they aren't my strength and that is true Never the less, here is a poem, here's a poem just for you When I was down you wrote one for me, wrote for me whilst I was down Then as Russell Brand you walked beside me, walked beside me round the town You spent the whole time laughing, only laughing, not a frown Even when I had a cramp in leg, that cramp made me fall down It really sucks to see ..." Read review
04.04.2007

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Dreams Of Us

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"I watched you tonight as you slumbered, your face smooth, and handsome, untroubled by haunting dreams. You murmered quietly, your lips, soft and plump, beckoning me closer to you. I kissed you gently, feeling the warmth of your body flowing through our lips, flooding my body with its hunger. I gazed at you, still adrift in your own world. You smiled, so tenderly, and I felt my heart bursting. The love I felt was pure, innocent, untainted ..." Read review
04.10.2006

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Community Level 2poeta73

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Tired heroes Review with images

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"Just another poem from my past. I love very much this poem, even if i don't really know if in the english transaltion it can be good. I had a poem award, some years ago for this poem, in a poetry contest. I was really glad to have it! Hoping u can like my words, have a good reading. --------------------------- ""Tired heroes"" As tired heroes of a bad proposed dream, we have in silence assisted at the defeat of our gods, not really ..." Read review
23.07.2008

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Community Level 7stuleg

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♦It wasn’t meant to be like this♦

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" In the past my poetry efforts have been pretty much limited to the occasional funny verse knocked up for others amusement, and the thought of trying to write any prose that was remotely serious or sensible would have filled me with dread. As you can imagine I am extremely nervous about posting this effort for others to read and critique, so please be gentle with me dear reader, but more than that please be honest with me in any ratings or comments ..." Read review
26.01.2004

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