Poems of Love

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LOVE POEM

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5 Dec 29th, 2003 

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Just a poem

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I got Ciao to put this category because there are loads of wonderful writers out there, and not enough poetry categories. Hope to see loads of poems soon..


Were I to chose a place to be
A place that really suited me
I'd chose to walk the path you walk
To talk the words we always talk
To hold your hand, to feel your smile
to kiss you at the kissing stile.
Yes, why should anything improve,
When what we feel is human love.
Your eyes, transparent to my own,
Cloak nothing, you are not alone,
Your arms are strong, your lips so kind,
And if I stay you will not mind
That even though the days go by
We never have to question why.
Just be there in this place and time,
That merits such a simple rhyme,
Close as two people can achieve,
I know that I shall never leave,
And in each thing I chose to do,
Will always stay here, lost in you.


Thankyou for reading.

Rachel X 

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tommy_magpie 07.01.2004 02:09

Beautiful. What more can I say?

herby30 05.01.2004 00:02

Beautiful Rach, Hx

Bigbaz 29.12.2003 21:12

Na couldn't do it ..Baz



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