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I thought I would give this a try, I am not very good at writing poetry but as they say, you won't get better unless you try, so after a gentle nudge by a lady on ciao, I won't mention names but I will say she is puuuuuuuuurfect, this lady can write poems so as I keep my word when I say that I will do something, here is my attempt at writing something.
I really tend to stick to things that I know and what I have experienced, sometimes it is a little over the top but if I can make someone smile, to me it is really worth while doing, writing about products is not for me, so please don't judge me by being in the cafe all of the time.
Here goes my attempt at writing a bit of poetry, feel free to say what you feel, but remember I am no Lord Byron or Shelley, if thats the right names, I am just an ordinary person with thoughts of his own.
I am the sunlight that shines so bright
I am the darkness that comes with the night
I am the voice that whispers your name
I am the reasoning that keeps you sane
I am the nightmare that comes in your dreams
I am the shrill that makes you scream
I am the one that will keep you calm
I am the one that will save you from harm
I am the beat that you feel in your heart
I am the one thats there from the start
I am the vision thats seen through your eyes
I AM THE SHADOW
THAT YOU SEEK FROM OUTSIDE !
There you go my attempt at writing a little poetry, as you know poetry is what you feel yourself, and the reader can interpret what ever they feel themselves, I could have done what I seen on the tv series My Family, when Ben went to a poetry class and he heard the mental woman at the back of the room recite her poem called Life, it went something lke,