I AM
Advantages If theres any let me know
Disadvantages I am not very good
I thought I would give this a try, I am not very good at writing poetry but as they say, you won't get better unless you try, so after a gentle nudge by a lady on ciao, I won't mention names but I will say she is puuuuuuuuurfect, this lady can write poems so as I keep my word when I say that I will do something, here is my attempt at writing something.
I really tend to stick to things that I know and what I have experienced, sometimes it is a little over the top but if I can make someone smile, to me it is really worth while doing, writing about products is not for me, so please don't judge me by being in the cafe all of the time.Here goes my attempt at writing a bit of poetry, feel free to say what you feel, but remember I am no Lord Byron or Shelley, if thats the right names, I am just an ordinary person with thoughts of his own.
I AMI am the sunlight
that shines so bright
I am the voice
that whispers your name
I am the nightmare
that comes in your dreams
I am the one that will
keep you calm
I am the beat
that you feel in your heart
I am the vision
thats seen through your eyes
THAT YOU SEEK FROM OUTSIDE !
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGH.
Who says that isn't an interpretation of poetry.well thanks once again.
The Shadow Returns.
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TheHairyGodmother 05/06/2007 13:55
stitch1969 21/08/2006 14:05
I am your other half who can get you committed. Karen xxx
neeraum31 28/07/2006 17:16
lovely poem :-)
sxylilbitch 27/07/2006 12:48
I like that poem dad. Especially after seeing it about 1 thousand times around the house lol. Keep writing your poems because they are cool. Ste xx
bluejules 26/07/2006 16:10
I really enjoyed that, a wonderful poem. Jules x
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