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Did your hear the whisper echo deep inside my brain,
Did you hear the footsteps follow me? There they are again...
Have you noticed something strange about the way I act?
Have you noticed something different, rather odd in fact?
Have you felt the fear that I am feeling every day?
Have you seen the way I found it impossible to say
Anything personal at all to you or anyone,
How I always hide away and want to be alone?
Have you noticed how I walk with my head slightly bowed?
It isn't disrespect at all, it's just because I'm scared.
It's not usual for me to look you in the eye,
I often look down to the floor so you don't see me cry.
I've always wondered how everyone one, just takes it in their stride,
I doubt you would notice at all if I was by your side.
I'm just a little person, someone life just passes by,
A little speck of dust, that irritates your eye.
But when I'm all alone at home, there's much you do not see,
There's so much I experience, and it really terrifies me.
If you just rolled up my shirt sleeves, you'd see bruise after bruise,
From years of punishment, neglect, and downright cruel abuse.
But I just sit there on my own and take it in my stride,
As I know once and for all, there's no-one by my side.

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  • Vspawn 10/07/2011 23:57
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  • Newboy3 29/04/2007 12:58
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    A wonderful poem! You express your feelings beautifully.

  • Secre 06/02/2007 12:03
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    Exceptional

    Brilliant poem, well deserving of E...how did I miss this one earlier? Lissy

  • COOOEEE 26/04/2006 00:39
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