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5 Stars NIGHT OF EXPLOSIONS
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Librelola

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This one was originally written in English for a change.
I posted it in this section because for some reason, when I go to the Poetry section or Poetry Challenge, I only have the option to "Edit Review" and not "Write A Review".
Does anyone know why? Can you only post one poem a month in each section?
If you do, please enlighten me!
I will try to post one more poem tonight, and then I shall go and read and give you (and myself) a break.

: )

NIGHT OF EXPLOSIONS


If only the night would last long enough,
To let me spit out all my poison;
Undercover of darkness,
My senses are fully alight.

If only time could freeze
For five eternal seconds,
To let me breathe in the peace
That I cannot find.

Given the right conditions,
We can all become monsters;
Given the right conditions,
A monster can turn into a king.

If only the night left seeds that I could plant,
I would grow trees of flashing darkness,
I would eat their fluorescent fruits of secrets,
And enter forever the realm of serene madness.

If only the night was a garment,
I would sew in onto my skin,
And watch the twilight break into the dawn,
Allowing me to finally live my dream.

© Librelola 2003


PS: My rating for this poem is perhaps exaggerated, but I really like it. I do!! : ) I am usually an modest person. : )

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  • PhoenixChick 18/03/2006 23:28
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  • silver40 04/09/2005 09:29
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    Wonderful poetry and I agree with steerpyke and richada that it should be seen by a wider audience. Dave

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