Advantages Do I have to answer this all the time?
Disadvantages I suppose I do!!
This one was originally written in English for a change.
I posted it in this section because for some reason, when I go to the Poetry section or Poetry Challenge, I only have the option to "Edit Review" and not "Write A Review".
Does anyone know why? Can you only post one poem a month in each section?
If you do, please enlighten me!
I will try to post one more poem tonight, and then I shall go and read and give you (and myself) a break.
NIGHT OF EXPLOSIONS
If only time could freeze
For five eternal seconds,
To let me breathe in the peace
That I cannot find.
If only the night left seeds that I could plant,
I would grow trees of flashing darkness,
I would eat their fluorescent fruits of secrets,
And enter forever the realm of serene madness.
© Librelola 2003
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