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playing games with hearts

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4 Oct 1st, 2007 

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my name is leif, i'm 20 and from south wales, i enjoy felinology, martial arts, rock climbing, ramb...

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i would like people to read the following poem and let me know what they really think of it, and what would it mean to them if they wrote it, as i am writing a new book and would like to know if this poem is worth publishing, thank you.

Playing Games with Hearts

Why do people play games?
They hide behind fear
They behind jobs, beliefs
Can't they just say what they want?
Can't they just say?
I love you, I need you
But I can't be with you.

When people play games
Do they realise the pain?
Two soul mates, just ignorant
Both longing for love
But hide behind excuses
Can't they just let go
Take what they need, want
Can't just let go
And let love in?

Could they be able to play games?
When it's too late? 

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