my name is leif, i'm 20 and from south wales, i enjoy felinology, martial arts, rock climbing, ramb...
my name is leif, i'm 20 and from south wales, i enjoy felinology, martial arts, rock climbing, rambling, and playing and listening to music
Member since:08.07.2007
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i would like people to read the following poem and let me know what they really think of it, and what would it mean to them if they wrote it, as i am writing a new book and would like to know if this poem is worth publishing, thank you.
Playing Games with Hearts
Why do people play games? They hide behind fear They behind jobs, beliefs Can't they just say what they want? Can't they just say? I love you, I need you But I can't be with you.
When people play games Do they realise the pain? Two soul mates, just ignorant Both longing for love But hide behind excuses Can't they just let go Take what they need, want Can't just let go And let love in?
Could they be able to play games? When it's too late?
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Advantages: 2 completely different poems on war and its views Disadvantages: not many that i can think of but then agian i love looking at history and the wars
louisacrompton 15.06.2006 ·
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Advantages: This is poetry that sings. TS Eliot was a master of the language. Disadvantages: Eliot was often purposely obscure, showing off his education
mattygroves 04.09.2002 ·
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