CHRISTMAS EVE
Advantages It's Christmas and im feeling merry.
Disadvantages some bad spelling, had to much sherry.
Well i hope ive done this right. Ive just had all my family round doing the Christmas booze up and earlie pressy giving ,which of cause went under the tree,hic.So as a special treat ive been making up a little christmas poem for you all .I hope you like it .
( nope i din't do it right as ive over wrote my first poem Ode to Rachel. Sorry baby i'll make it up to you love mummy)
"Goodnight sleepy heads"
as the kid's go to sleep.
Snugged in their beds
"come on go to peeps".
Then out with the sherry
a carrot and pie.
For a fellow who's merry
and for he who can fly.
Shoving pressy's under the tree
he head's for the fire.
It's nearly quarter past three
so tired he want's to retire.
Then up the chimley
onto the roof.
"Right on to Henley"
Rudolf's hot on the hoof.
Homeward's bound
untill next year.
Over snowy ground
with his flying deer.
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MAFARRIMOND 09/11/2007 16:50
johnny5isaliveorishedead 01/08/2003 23:04
That was pretty good.
Rini 05/07/2003 21:47
genie-1803 13/06/2003 12:39
weemam 10/04/2003 23:52