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5 Stars CHRISTMAS EVE
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Advantages It's Christmas and im feeling merry.

Disadvantages some bad spelling, had to much sherry.

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fanny

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Well i hope ive done this right. Ive just had all my family round doing the Christmas booze up and earlie pressy giving ,which of cause went under the tree,hic.So as a special treat ive been making up a little christmas poem for you all .I hope you like it .
( nope i din't do it right as ive over wrote my first poem Ode to Rachel. Sorry baby i'll make it up to you love mummy)

***************christmas eve*************************


"Goodnight sleepy heads"
as the kid's go to sleep.
Snugged in their beds
"come on go to peeps".

Then downstairs we creep
as quite as mice.
Kid's are now asleep
so warm and nice.

Then out with the sherry
a carrot and pie.
For a fellow who's merry
and for he who can fly.

Then we go to bed
and as quick as a flash.
A man appears in red
coverd in soot and ash.

Shoving pressy's under the tree
he head's for the fire.
It's nearly quarter past three
so tired he want's to retire.

But he has his sherry
and rub's his belly.
Get's nice and merry
and wobbles like a jelly.

Then up the chimley
onto the roof.
"Right on to Henley"
Rudolf's hot on the hoof.

And away they go
through the night sky.
Like and arrow and bow
away they fly.

Homeward's bound
untill next year.
Over snowy ground
with his flying deer.


Well i hpoe you liked it as this was just for fun.
Wishing you all a mery christmas and a happy new year ,love fanny.

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    That was pretty good.

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