Cabot's... and Strength...
Advantages Enjoy, any comments welcome.
Disadvantages What disadvantages?
The wind
on Brandon hill
Waves the trees
and there leaves
go
with
it
almost to
open waters
a beauty place:
Where,
from last centuries’
secret gardens
rocks and colour-full
and dark ever-greens,
steeples and towers stick out –
bunched between branches
see magic glade in city air
by day
the windy paths and grasses
peopled by
lovers lunch-breakers
dog-strollers and tea-takers –
by night
the grounds are still;
great gothic tower
looms –
entrance gated
staircase
dank, turret-like
spiralled
full of whispers
whilst moon
spills ghosts
onto the paths
Strength in the face of domesticity
With full belly-ness
there are moments of satisfaction.
but who will renew?
Not me –
but again,
I must –
every day every meal.
I pray to the god of
Personal Loans
for an automated
afterlife.
I would love to hear from anybody what they like and dislike about my poem.
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MAFARRIMOND 09/11/2007 16:46
genie-1803 28/02/2003 23:43
Legolas999 26/02/2003 19:08
Ladywell1 03/01/2003 03:09
Hi and thank you for your op. your lovely poems. All that I can find to say at time is for you to keep up the good work. Thanks and Happy New Year. Jenn.
Shahjahan 15/12/2002 19:51
nice poem