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Dear Readers!
Today I’d like to write my first poetry in English normally I write in the winter some poems, but now I’d like to do it in the summer and in English. I hope you can understand it. I think it’s not bad and I hope for good ratings in my second opinion. Now the poem.
I’m sitting here, alone, without you my dear. I’d like to put you in my arm, because now my heart isn’t warm.
I will give you a kiss, on your mouth, because I love this. Why you do this one-night-stand, I never will hold your hand.
I can’t forgive you all this, not with a “all ok” and a kiss. You are died for me, but I love not she... .
You and me we are two, oh Girl, oh Babe, I love you.
I hope the poem is good and I wish you a nice day!
Bye Tratschonkelchen
Sorry for my terrible English, but I’m from Switzerland!
20.11.2003 23:37
All poetry is worth the effort. It is a little part of the person that wrote it. Rachel
04.10.2003 00:50
great poem :) Take care, Sarah xx
01.10.2003 20:09
nice poem...and your english is better than mine (I'm spanish....), regards!!