Poetry

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I hate your hate

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1 Apr 12th, 2007 

3 Ciao members have rated this review on average: helpful

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for a beautiful woman

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she despises me

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oneofus

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dedicated to a disdainful beauty

Member since:06.04.2007

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come my temptress sisters
sing my song of the damned
I see the void I smell it
come my temptress sisters
youll soon know who I am

the first born has the strength of ten
the second is a lamb
I hear the pain I want it
the first born has her coven
the second is a sham

a sham for turning yellow
a sham for cautious faith
I sense the hurt I tame it
preach to you I will
preach until you get your fill

come my temptress beauties
one grasped and then denied
I taste the need I feed it
the other who dislikes my creed
she is the one I really need

the eyes so blue
the mouth so sweet
I want your soul I beg it
your disdain is my arousal
I wont be beat by shunning heat

forget the useless weak
I want you as my own
I crave your heart I seek it
forget the useless weak
you are godess I am meek

do you know this is for you?
read between the lines
I desire your flesh and soul
but never will you turn
forever I will burn

the father and the son
the sisters of the curse
betwiching woman of such bliss
the father and the son
and sister of my viled love

amazing you are
and I hate your hate

 

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jenny76 15.04.2007 23:06

Not quite sure what was going on there? J76

n13roy 14.04.2007 18:23

Very strange piece of writing there !!!!.........

moveforward 12.04.2007 03:50

I have an immense love for poetry, but can't stomach anything written that sounds bitter, angry, or negative. Do you hate women or do you love them?



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