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I wrote this before I met my husband - I hope you like it - it was at a time in my life when I was 'with' someone who I knew there was no chance of a relationship with as niether of us were really ready after brutal divorces, but we found solace and a certain kind of love and passion in each other.
~~~~~~~ LOVERS ~~~~~~~
Anticipation keeps her high for days Aftermath ensures her mood remains She longs for his touch in the days between Then they meet, their passion keen She comes alive with his kiss, his touch He seems to want her just as much
here they are, wrapped in ecstasy She is lost to all but him his smell, his touch bodies melding in absolute union as their lips meet time and again hearts beat against one another Intensity forcing all but THEM into distant recesses of mind Sighs as the magic starts to recede They begin to wake, flushed, breathless, jubilant Reluctant, that final parting, both with a groan of regret But none lasting
Until the next time
No promises uttered or jealousies claimed Their ardor doesn't look to fade The world around them disappears As they abandon all worth tears And lose themselves in each other The moonlit night the perfect cover