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Community Level 1bbbecca

bbbecca

The Morning After

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"Placing my palm on your bare chest, I feel the soft flicker of your heart. I smile and remember its fierce pounding against mine, only Last night ago. We pledged to belong to each other Now and Forevermore, Husband and Wife invariably intertwined. I watch you sleep and wonder- Where has my heart been hiding all this time? At that moment I knew that life had held us at bay to find each other. Our life together will hold many ..." Read review
21.05.2010

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A Poem

Advantages Ahhh, I'm a soppy old git

DisadvantagesI mean, cough, I am a tough gruff man. See me roar. ROAR!

"...seem to be is blue But poems aren't my strength, they aren't my strength and that is true Never the less, here is a poem, here's a poem just for you When I was down you wrote one for me, wrote for me whilst I was down Then as Russell Brand you walked beside me, walked beside me round the town You spent the whole time laughing, only laughing, not a frown Even when I had a cramp in leg, that cramp made me fall down It really sucks to see ..." Read review
04.04.2007

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Community Level 2lonelysoul

lonelysoul

Dreams Of Us

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"I watched you tonight as you slumbered, your face smooth, and handsome, untroubled by haunting dreams. You murmered quietly, your lips, soft and plump, beckoning me closer to you. I kissed you gently, feeling the warmth of your body flowing through our lips, flooding my body with its hunger. I gazed at you, still adrift in your own world. You smiled, so tenderly, and I felt my heart bursting. The love I felt was pure, innocent, untainted ..." Read review
04.10.2006

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Community Level 2poeta73

poeta73

Tired heroes Review with images

Advantagesit's mine

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"Just another poem from my past. I love very much this poem, even if i don't really know if in the english transaltion it can be good. I had a poem award, some years ago for this poem, in a poetry contest. I was really glad to have it! Hoping u can like my words, have a good reading. --------------------------- ""Tired heroes"" As tired heroes of a bad proposed dream, we have in silence assisted at the defeat of our gods, not really ..." Read review
23.07.2008

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Community Level 7stuleg

stuleg

♦It wasn’t meant to be like this♦

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" In the past my poetry efforts have been pretty much limited to the occasional funny verse knocked up for others amusement, and the thought of trying to write any prose that was remotely serious or sensible would have filled me with dread. As you can imagine I am extremely nervous about posting this effort for others to read and critique, so please be gentle with me dear reader, but more than that please be honest with me in any ratings or comments ..." Read review
26.01.2004

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Community Level 7Elffriend

Elffriend

Love, loss and friendship

Advantagesanother try at poetry

Disadvantagesfor you to judge

"...so I’m putting this under poems of love. There are three in all, I hope you will bear with me; this will be a long review. One is a definite poem of love, one is to friendship, and the other is love of the earth. This first one is a poem for a friend that is going through a hard time. I wrote it especially for her last night. It can easily be for other of my “buddies” and anyone feeling low. Don’t Despair. When life is getting hard and ..." Read review
20.06.2004

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Community Level 2KissMyDonkey

KissMyDonkey

Where you were...

AdvantagesIt's love Jim

DisadvantagesBut not as we know it

"Tell me where you were, When they cried out in the night? I was right there beside them, With my strong paternal light. And tell me where you were, When they did not smell too sweet? I was armed with a nappy, And tickling tiny feet. And so were you around, When they took those tiny paces? I was holding out my arms, I was counting out the spaces. What about that odd first day, They had to go to school? I was standing ..." Read review
08.01.2007

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Community Level 2cornixregina

cornixregina

From a Damsel to her Knight - **Updated**

Advantagesgets a weight of my chest

Disadvantagesreminder of things

"...Ah dee **---------------------UPDATE--------------------** Next are 3 untitled poems made up on the spot: WRITTEN 19/11/06 Three years ago today You left destined not to stay You are my Knight When you died I lost my light All I feel is pain As I mourn for you over and over again Around me I feel you But what i really want to do Is to have you here So I can live without fear But unfortunately i must wait And see ..." Read review
05.11.2006

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Community Level 5Red-blood-...

Red-blood-Black-heart

FORBBIDEN LOVE AND HEARTBREAK

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"Just some poems i have wrote, most of them are about either heartbreak or forbidden love. hope you like them The room is dark with a certain chill The walls are black with a hint of mist His teeth will bite right into me To restrain me he clutches my writs My world starts to spin On my clothes the blood will drop I feel his bite right into my neck Adrelling rushes from bottom to top His blazing eyes glare at me His stare has captured ..." Read review
11.05.2007

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Community Level 2UnholyConf...

UnholyConfessions

Healing of the Heart

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"This poem was written in a rocky patch between me and my girlfriend. Needless to say we broke up and I never showed the poem to anyone but here it is now. This is my first time at doing something like this and it was written on the spur of the moment. Please be fair with comments but be honest. If you don't like I would like to know why however it wont mean to me that the poem lacks feeling or meaning. These feelings are real... * Healing of the ..." Read review
21.10.2006

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Community Level 4INXS-Girl

INXS-Girl

The Vampires Kiss

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"Lips parted, he teases, no kiss Just his breath caressing my face. For a moment I can't breath I'm dying inside - agony and Ecstasy rocking me to the core. He turns his head, slightly to one side; My breast rising and falling in anticipation. His lips brush mine for less than a second; Eyes tinted with obsession. A stray lock of hair falls loose Over his forehead (I don't want to push it back into place.) His mouth gently exploring ..." Read review
29.12.2006

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Community Level 3Theshadowr...

Theshadowreturns

Together as one

AdvantagesLove has many

Disadvantagessadly there is a few

"I am not very good at writing poetry but I do try every now and again, so I thought I would give it a try and see what I could come up with. I sat and thought for a while and pondered over what kind of subject I could write about, and I must admit that it is not very easy to come up with something straight away. I finally decided that I would write something about the area that I live in, I live in what is known as the wedding capital or to ..." Read review
18.12.2005

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Community Level 2dragonman1...

dragonman1777

Letter To Lost Love

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"I know you know I'm hurting And I know that you know why You're sexy and you're flirting But it's with the other guy I'm trying not to notice it I'm trying to be friends I'm trying to stay centered While my fractured ego mends ***** I never thought I'd fall for you I thought myself too strong Yes, I can play this game for two Sure, I can play along I love to kiss and bite and lick Your body's full of pleasure I didn't look before ..." Read review
04.12.2005

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Community Level 6kelr101

kelr101

The right time to say yes?

AdvantagesWanting

DisadvantagesWaiting

"When is the right time to say yes? The amused grin swept across his cherub face, As he watched me stumble, falling without grace. Rushing to catch me, he swept me high in the air His strong masculine structure holding me safely there Chuckling softly he started to help me down, Then suddenly flipped me round and round. Dizzily I giggled at his mischievous tricks And pulled him closer for a sensuous kiss. His hand reached for mine ..." Read review
29.09.2005

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Beloved ...

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"....however any better suggestions would be appreciated on a Post Card please.... Oh to feel your fingers run across my face again to feel your tears brush my burning cheeks and your crashing tangle my hair .... Leaving the trace of the day on my sun drenched skin Brushing into silver over the memories ... To hear your song calling to my ears I want to run ... Falling until you wrap your force around me ..." Read review
08.02.2007

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