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  • 6 of 6 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    bbbecca

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    Placing my palm on your bare chest, I feel the soft flicker of your heart. I smile and remember its fierce pounding against mine, only Last night ago. We pledged to belong to each other Now and Forevermore, Husband and Wife invariably intertwined. I watch you sleep and wonder- Where has my heart been hiding all this time? At that moment I knew that life had held us at bay to find each other. Our life together will hold many surprises; I know though, that just as long as we have each other, However tall the mountain, We will overcome. I throw my legs over yours And smile at the new found ... more
  • 77 of 77 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    Level 6 reddragonflame87

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    5 Stars A Poem 04/04/2007
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    Hello, Fat Tony here, your friendly neighborhood gangster man. Yesterday, after a hard day of busting caps and boxing beats, I saw that a good friend of mine was feeling down. She's had a bad weekend. She's been incredible to me over the past few months, and wrote a very lovely poem for me which can be found at my MySpace. After chatting to her for a while, I decided it'd be nice if I wrote a poem to show how much I love her as a friend, and how much I appreciate her. So, I came up with this. It's entitled simply, "A Poem". Please bear in mind it's my first ever poem.... I'm more of a "There ... more
  • 29 of 29 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    lonelysoul

    3 Stars Dreams Of Us 04/10/2006
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    I watched you tonight as you slumbered, your face smooth, and handsome, untroubled by haunting dreams. You murmered quietly, your lips, soft and plump, beckoning me closer to you. I kissed you gently, feeling the warmth of your body flowing through our lips, flooding my body with its hunger. I gazed at you, still adrift in your own world. You smiled, so tenderly, and I felt my heart bursting. The love I felt was pure, innocent, untainted by life, by us. I wept then, for the moments we had wasted, in anger and bitterness, wounding each other with words far sharper than any blade. Was I there ... more
  • 18 of 18 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    poeta73

    5 Stars Tired heroes Review with images 23/07/2008
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    Just another poem from my past. I love very much this poem, even if i don't really know if in the english transaltion it can be good. I had a poem award, some years ago for this poem, in a poetry contest. I was really glad to have it! Hoping u can like my words, have a good reading. --------------------------- ""Tired heroes"" As tired heroes of a bad proposed dream, we have in silence assisted at the defeat of our gods, not really inclined to satisfy maybe banal exploits, rather addicted to disdain lied ideals shapes, artificial paradises where we'd have lost our most secret emotions. It was ... more
  • 89 of 89 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    stuleg

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    In the past my poetry efforts have been pretty much limited to the occasional funny verse knocked up for others amusement, and the thought of trying to write any prose that was remotely serious or sensible would have filled me with dread. As you can imagine I am extremely nervous about posting this effort for others to read and critique, so please be gentle with me dear reader, but more than that please be honest with me in any ratings or comments you wish to leave. It is a slushy and maudlin verse but then life can sometimes be the same. ♦It wasn’t meant to be like this♦ It wasn’t ... more
  • 43 of 43 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    Elffriend

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    Introduction I’ve written so much poetry, I’m not sure what category I have left, so I’m putting this under poems of love. There are three in all, I hope you will bear with me; this will be a long review. One is a definite poem of love, one is to friendship, and the other is love of the earth. This first one is a poem for a friend that is going through a hard time. I wrote it especially for her last night. It can easily be for other of my “buddies” and anyone feeling low. Don’t Despair. When life is getting hard and the going is so rough When you think you’ve reached rock bottom, as life is oh ... more
  • 16 of 16 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    KissMyDonkey

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    Tell me where you were, When they cried out in the night? I was right there beside them, With my strong paternal light. And tell me where you were, When they did not smell too sweet? I was armed with a nappy, And tickling tiny feet. And so were you around, When they took those tiny paces? I was holding out my arms, I was counting out the spaces. What about that odd first day, They had to go to school? I was standing by the gates, I was crying like a fool. And when they needed comfort, Cause the world was oh-so bad? I was talking to them softly, So they would not feel so sad. And then where did ... more
  • 15 of 15 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    cornixregina

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    These are written for my boyfriend: WITHOUT MY ROCK There is no time - it has stopped Dead like my will to carry on My rock has vanished And so has my heart I have become no more than an empty shell With nothing but a shadow of myself My sole has gone My spirit dead Life goes on but I am not here Every night I am with my rock But every morning we must part Forever he will have my heart I am forever longing for the day When I am reunited with my rock and heart For my chance to be again With the help of my rock A LIFE LOST My one true love has gone Left me here all alone Now where to go I do not ... more
  • 40 of 40 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    Red-blood-Black-heart

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    Just some poems i have wrote, most of them are about either heartbreak or forbidden love. hope you like them The room is dark with a certain chill The walls are black with a hint of mist His teeth will bite right into me To restrain me he clutches my writs My world starts to spin On my clothes the blood will drop I feel his bite right into my neck Adrelling rushes from bottom to top His blazing eyes glare at me His stare has captured my soul I white pure virgin entered the room Yet a whore will leave no longer whole If they new about what goes on No longer would I be able to stay Locked up ... more
  • 20 of 20 Ciao users found the following review helpful
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    UnholyConfessions

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    This poem was written in a rocky patch between me and my girlfriend. Needless to say we broke up and I never showed the poem to anyone but here it is now. This is my first time at doing something like this and it was written on the spur of the moment. Please be fair with comments but be honest. If you don't like I would like to know why however it wont mean to me that the poem lacks feeling or meaning. These feelings are real... * Healing of the Heart * Black curtains closed sharply over my window of life, Despairing darkened thoughts would cloud my future. The feel of innocent skin gashed by ... more
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