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Community Level 5PhoenixChick

PhoenixChick

Memory Lane Holds A Mugger Tonight

Advantagesmy kind of therapy

Disadvantagesdepressing

"**NEW** *LETTER TO MY MOTHER* What do you want me to do, Ma? What will make things right? What will make you smile again? So we don't have to fight? What can I say to make you glad? Make you pleased to have me near? What do I need to get for you? For you to hold me dear? You had a bad day, well so did I, But what's the point of saying? You'll only say it's all my fault, I should have been obeying, Obeying the Lord and Master, The ..." Read review
06.05.2005

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Community Level 4Sal4Mike

Sal4Mike

Was I Crazy or What?

AdvantagesGetting it off my chest!!

Disadvantagesnone to my knowledge!

"...made a booklet of the poems I wrote for him. I have put here the first poem I wrote (even though it's not about anger!) and the last one out of the 100 I wrote for him. (Which is!). I've also included one about the situation it left me in. The relationship lasted for 18 months. I have since gone on to meet and marry a wonderful, loving man who deserves the love I have to give. Crazy I am to feel this way when I only met you the other day I ..." Read review
29.06.2006

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Community Level 5Librelola

Librelola

NIGHT OF EXPLOSIONS

AdvantagesDo I have to answer this all the time?

DisadvantagesI suppose I do!!

"This one was originally written in English for a change. I posted it in this section because for some reason, when I go to the Poetry section or Poetry Challenge, I only have the option to "Edit Review" and not "Write A Review". Does anyone know why? Can you only post one poem a month in each section? If you do, please enlighten me! I will try to post one more poem tonight, and then I shall go and read and give you (and myself) a break. : ..." Read review
26.08.2005

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Community Level 5Scotsmanmatt

Scotsmanmatt

The Faceless Murderers Review with images

AdvantagesUnsure

DisadvantagesUnsure

"They all have a cause; A point to make. But don't give a toss, 'Bout the heartbreak they create. Men and women like you and me, That's what they'd say if asked who they are. But what you'll find if you unlock the key, Is creatures of barbarity, nature having no par. They planted their bombs to go off in waves, Knowing their victims could be of many. Women, men, children or babes, Of lesser value to them than a worn-out penny. To ..." Read review
08.07.2005

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Budapest remembered

AdvantagesWritten from the heart

DisadvantagesMy heart has aged since then

"This poem was written when I was about 17. It's immature, crass in places, and there are quite a few things about it that make me cringe on re-reading. It also goes on too long. On the other hand, there are some lines in it that still stir in me the passion of the time and of which I'm still rather proud. I've tried re-writing it several times, in an attempt to preserve the good lines whilst cutting out the naivety - both philosophical and ..." Read review
04.11.2006

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Community Level 5britum2000

britum2000

2002, somewhere near Soham

AdvantagesSummer 2002 was fine and hot

DisadvantagesSummer 2002 was marked by evil and tragedy.

"I never intended to delete this but my clumsiness on the site caused it to disappear. I've only brought it back now because this is a family time of year. And we should spare a thought perhaps, for those who have suffered losses too great to bear. Do you remember the Summer of 2002? Do you recall anything of significance? Let me jog your memory, this was the Summer that Jessica and Holly disappeared and the whole nation waited for news. As the ..." Read review
23.12.2006

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Community Level 4suereaney

suereaney

An open letter to my father

AdvantagesRealisation of the truth

DisadvantagesMemories are difficult sometimes

"To my father, I tried hard today, Really I did, Tried to remember a time, When you were not angry. Fury burning in your eyes like fire. Hatred consuming everything but itself. Did you ever love me at all? You use to tell me that you hated me so often, A sneer would distort your face, distort my heart. I wanted to be loved by you, to be your ‘little girl’. But I never was, was I? I wanted to be cuddled and held in your arms To feel secure. ..." Read review
02.07.2004

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Community Level 7Elffriend

Elffriend

Various poems on anger and rage

Advantagesreleases pain

Disadvantagesbeware some topics are very painful

"Just a quick openimg, some of these are not for the faint-hearted. 1. To my family. when mum was ill , she shared my home. you were so grateful, it was not you, tied up with your own lives, I lifted the resonsibility you sighed with relief The choice was made. No matter that you had the space all I had was a terraced home. You had the means to give much more space for a bedroom and a separate room All I could give her was a bed and ..." Read review
07.05.2004

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Community Level 2Stevey101

Stevey101

Why did you have to come

AdvantagesNone

DisadvantagesChilds feelings, parent neglecting his child

"A little bit of imagination goes along way in poetry, but planning goes even further. Imagine your self in this young boys shoes, and relate to what hes sayin. My feelings for you show how night time can fall, all i hear is your sound, harrasing my walls, why did you have to come? Ruin my life? Why did my dad, make you his wife? As night time falls, everything becomes a scare, all the trees, plants and walls, nothing looks so bare, everybody ..." Read review
02.01.2007

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Community Level 1higherclas...

higherclassdog

Slasher

AdvantagesI wrote it

Disadvantagesabsolutely none

"She took the chance at killing Spurred by a temporary craze Just as the blood was spilling She entered the darkest faze Now she wouldn't stop Not for subconcious mind Everyone would drop To pain she would be blind The power was too great There would be no refusal She'd chosen a card of fate That gave her death's perusal To hand pick those for slashing Was all part of the lust The knife would soon come crashing And turn them all to dust Why ..." Read review
08.01.2007

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Community Level 2Filthyneon

Filthyneon

The Metamorphosis (Lament of Laurea Delphica)

AdvantagesSaftey

DisadvantagesI grew roots.

"It started at my toes, a comfortable vacancy between digits now returning to one. It tickled, like the sun-beaten sand. But I could feel his fiery breath at my neck. Singeing my hair, Like a terrible bull. So I prayed. This wasn't what I meant. Ankles knocking together like a gavel, knees dove-tailing. Toes pushing through the dirt like great claws. And thighs enclosed with xylem, like millions of tiny bars to a cell. My arms rising, like ..." Read review
20.03.2006

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Community Level 3leannerobo...

leannerobotham

Poem with no-name

Advantagesnone

Disadvantagesnone

"This poem is a little darker than my usual, let me know what you think, any criticism is welcomed as I always love when people can tell me how to make my poetry better. This dosnt yet have a title, so any ideas??? Poem with no-name............... A shuddering smile rots her face An awakened being creates a race She withers in pain her soul a disgrace As she knows she can defeat this place In the darkening hours they crawl out from the ..." Read review
20.09.2004

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Community Level 2gemsadler

gemsadler

Loosing Mum and being angry with god Review with images

AdvantagesSome people will know exactly what i mean and be able to relate to it

DisadvantagesIt is written from my heart and other people may not understand

"Christmas is coming I'm Ten years old I should be warm and excited But instead i'm freezing cold My mind is in pieces My emotions are raw Coz i know it won't be long now Till your at heavens door Four days before christmas i'm woken from my bed. To be told in kinder words that my mummy is now dead. A special Angel came last night and took your mum away, So she's not in pain now, not suffering in any way. My heart stops and tears fall ..." Read review
18.05.2005

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Community Level 2snow_queen

snow_queen

A few of my thoughts.... Review with images

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Disadvantages...

"Please understand that these were written during times of deep emotional stress and pain, and so may contain rude language and topics which some people may find offensive. If you do not wish to read things of this nature then please do not read ahead. Thank you.... 1) Slit and feel the pain, Look and see the blood, Sigh and feel the power, Feel your heart fill with love, Finally be happy, Finally be free, Finally understand, Just ..." Read review
26.11.2004

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Community Level 2kia7

kia7

Understand me

AdvantagesReleases the anger

Disadvantagesnone as of yet

"...best life either, I write poems all the time as an ‘adrenalin buster’. I’ve been very angry at me and myself lately and I’m just trying to find a reason why. This is my therapy, enjoy…(or not as the case may be) Put my jigsaw back together Take my aching pain away Find my cure, Those wrists I cover, gain an extra notch each day That’s more than I can say for me Tell me something I don’t know Tell me why each time I bleed I think it’s time ..." Read review
30.03.2004

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