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Short Stories

... Shortly after Dzon had taken up his chant, the Igor character returned to Fr. Adamson from the darkness, baring a long curved knife, with which he open up the throat of the priest from ear to ear. Blood spurted from the wound and the priest thrashed wildly against his bonds, but within seconds ... Read review

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The Felix Horror

Advantages: Not half bad
Disadvantages: Not my best work either

...to face the newcomer, a short middle-aged man, wearing a dark suit complete with the dog-collar of a Catholic priest.
"Who the hell are you and what are you doing here?" said Booker, so shocked by the sudden appearance that any kind of protocol left his head.
"I'm Father Adamson," said the priest, stepping from the doorway and pacing further into the room, "I've come help you."
"Help me? How?" ...
...Booker pulled up some way short of his destination and switched off the engine, before setting out on foot along with Fr. Adamson. In silence they climbed the steep, scarp face of the hill, keeping low to the ground to avoid being seen. As they neared the peak Booker reeled and staggered, impelled forward by a heavy blow to the back of the head. Losing his balance he fell and, as his face met the cold earth. Consciousness fled him.

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baalzamon 29.03.2006
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The Calling of the Keeper

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...blessed scroll. I started the short but unpleasant walk toward the sturdy oak door at the base of the tower. As I did so, the moonlight revealed a small circular window placed above the entrance, its frame strangled with various overgrown wall plants, the darkness beyond: a mystery. The stairway wound steeply upwards in front of me, the grey, stone slab steps disappearing in the gloom but a metre away. A colossal spider scurried across the floor ...
...a cobweb brushed across my face causing an involuntary shiver. I delayed not, but travelled up the stairs in haste, not wanting to remain any longer than was necessary in such a ghastly place. My footsteps echoed noisily up and down the narrow staircase and I felt the occasional loose step beneath my feet, each time making me start uneasily. The heat provided no extra comfort, merely stirring my claustrophobia and yet furthering my uncertainty. ...

bengar 06.09.2006 · Read full review
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A Tale of Faries

Advantages: my children love it
Disadvantages: my poor spelling and grammar and all the " turned into ? when i pasted it in

A bit about me ; I am not a 'serious' writer, i don?t ever expect to earn a living from it I just enjoy writing and I would really love to know what you think, I have never put any creative writing on here so i apologise if this is really amateurish i don?t want to offend any of the great writers on here but thought id give it a shot. For years I have been telling this story to my children, this is only the first part of it, it goes on and on all ...
...a child. My daughters have always enjoyed asking me about it and wanting me to tell them more that I have so much to remember I have started writing it all down. I hope you enjoy it as much as my 7 and 8 year old; A tale of Faries Most sensible people don?t believe in fairies. But then Tina was never really sensible. Not like Sherrie, Sherrie was always the sensible one, when Tina messed up (and she did this quite often) Sherrie was there to sort ...

tinac37 11.02.2009 · Read full review
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Boys on a Bridge

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Boys on a Bridge Slowly and with heavy heart the man walked up the long incline of the approach road. He continued on past the first abutment tower, unaware of all around him until he had crossed the first span of the bridge and was standing on the south pier. He edged along the wall until he had a clear view of the Tower. There he stopped and looked out across a grey Thames under an equally grey sky. He was looking for the years that had gone. ...
...turned his collar up to protect against the chill December wind and reached inside his jacket pocket, feeling for the coin that he knew was there. He gripped it lightly in his fingers, moving it between them and rubbing his thumb and forefinger over its surfaces. He read it like a blind man, recognizing it's features, it's pitted face and it's jagged edges. All too soon, he remembered how he came by it and the memory was like a cold hand laid upon ...

Newboy3 20.11.2005 · Read full review
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A Passion For Words

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...piece of creative nonfiction (or short story, if you will), which I had composed last year. It is based on actual incidents which my father Stephen recounted to me just before he died in August of 2003; he was an English teacher for many years, and he adored literature and poetry. I remembered everything I could, put in some my own little transitions to make it a flowing story, and submitted this for a Creative Writing class last year, and the professor ...
...like to share it all with you. Thank you for reading, and I hope you like it. Chris :) ************************************************************************ “A Passion For Words” ************************************************************************ I shut my briefcase with mixed feelings of accomplishment and sorrow. For the past 37 years, I had provided education to thousands of students and now I was leaving the job I loved. It's not that ...

eve6kicksass 01.06.2007 (02.06.2007) · Read full review
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Do Bank Robbers Go To Heaven?

Advantages: It's a short story
Disadvantages: It's the worst pun in the world

Gerald Stansbury was nervous. In fact, he was more than nervous, he was absolutely cacking himself. He'd never robbed a bank before. He'd never even left a shop without accidentally paying and yet here he was, about to permanently relieve his employees of a not inconsiderable sum of money. As he sat alone at his desk, having turned down the fourth person that day for a loan, he considered his position. He was mid-thirties, single, and he still lived ...
...made him want to have an ear-ectomy and if he had to wipe her bottom again after one of her little 'accidents', he would scream. His father he thought, had had the best idea. Horatio Stansbury had been sentenced to life imprisonment for littering. Or so his mother had told him. He'd never met his father and it had never occurred to him that although his father had been in prison for forty years, Gerald was only thirty-five years old. He also wondered ...

4ku-Papa 06.02.2008 · Read full review
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