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The tower, stretching high into the rapidly darkening, cloudy sky, was perched precariously on the gorge top, overlooking the surrounding empty plains. A fantastic piece of workmanship, the tower clearly defied nature itself, having stood there for hundreds of centuries of angry weather and seeming to ignore the dangers the gorge presented.
Its magnificent blackened stone walls and burnt window timbers spoke of the fire that once occurred here, one side deprived of the luxurious ivy that most of the tower walls exhibited. It was a wonder that anything could or would remain inside the tower after the obvious catastrophe and yet this is where I had been instructed to seek the scroll: in an abandoned and dangerously situated tower, reeking of malevolence.
Thus, I had travelled here, to the remote Island of Moden where I may find the gorge and with it: the tower. The journey, which was quite a novelty on foot rather than a horse and carriage, had been relatively uneventful, scarcely a danger other than the usual; the weather had been generally kind; no wild animals had made their presence known and there was an exotic abundance of fruit to satisfy my hunger.
I stood there, regarding the tower with curiosity, a feeling of dread entering my gut as I noted the birds of prey circling the pointed tip of the tower top. I lowered my gaze marginally to look at the curious deformed shapes of the gargoyles, appearing to watch me hungrily, reminding me I was lacking company, warning me to watch my every step. The moon was gaining in height now, and a spectral light enveloped the tower, the ivy seeming golden and even the rocks which had been as black as a void appeared slightly paler. Were it not under such dire circumstances, I may have been tempted to refer to the sight as prestigious. The stairway wound steeply upwards in front of me, the grey, stone slab steps disappearing in the gloom but a metre away. A colossal spider scurried across the floor before abruptly disappearing into a hole in the wall and a cobweb brushed across my face causing an involuntary shiver.
I delayed not, but travelled up the stairs in haste, not wanting to remain any longer than was necessary in such a ghastly place. My footsteps echoed noisily up and down the narrow staircase and I felt the occasional loose step beneath my feet, each time making me start uneasily. The heat provided no extra comfort, merely stirring my claustrophobia and yet furthering my uncertainty.
Since I had entered the building, I had been wondering idly if I really was alone. My eyes informed me I was, but my mind insisted I wasn't. A sudden sound behind me caused me to spin in fright and a beautiful tawny owl landed smoothly upon a charred window sill. It gazed solemnly at me, a gaze so intense that I could feel it penetrate my line of thought. A rich and instructive voice like one might imagine their conscience to sound entered my head. It spoke intelligently and I knew its words were filled with wisdom.
"Go forth to meet the keeper, Sylvester. Beware his malice and liquid breath and remember this if nothing else: If the skin of Good and Evil does touch, then both lives are forfeit."
It spoke the last angrily as if it was commanding such, and then the presence snapped from my mind, leaving just an empty space, sending a chill down my spine and consequently, I felt the hairs rise on the nape of my neck.
The owl which had been sitting patiently, its eye contact with me never extinguished, seemed suddenly disorientated and hooting loudly as if in alarm and consternation, it ruffled it's hazel-coloured feathers before lifting itself into the air and hurriedly flying from my vicinity, back from whence it came.
I paused. My mind was in uproar and confusion and I was torn between whether to continue into the unknown darkness ahead and remain in isolation, or returning to my village outside and ignoring my calling to 'the church'. Even as I thought of the latter, my mind seemed to retaliate to the thought and I staggered as if struck by a potent blow. The abrupt attack intensified my desire for the scroll and I ran.
I sprinted rapidly up the attenuated staircase, blood pounding in my ears, all previous feelings of vertigo and claustrophobia dismissed in my urge to find the scroll and exit this citadel of abhorrence. The black, grimy walls with their crumbling mortar blurred past my face and tears appeared unbidden to my wild eyes. I slipped and didn't feel the pain as the floor raced up to hit me. Scratching, clawing, panting and crying, I desperately crawled upwards and only did I stop when I became aware of a welcome draught on my face. I glanced up, hoping, longing that I was at the end of my horrific journey. It wasn't possible! I faced a solid rock wall no different and certainly just as detestable as any I had passed so far. A terrible wail of anguish and frustration escaped my lips.
It was a few seconds before my brain was back in the condition to even attempt to think and when I finally did, the thoughts I had were thoroughly disturbing and unpleasant. What happened now? Was I to die here? In my present state I certainly could not venture back down the staircase. I would not have the courage and my claustrophobia was returning and with it, the doubt of ever obtaining the scroll. I was thankful there was not a window near me for I must have been several hundred feet into the air by now and I did not pride myself in my adjustment to heights. I shivered and realised that there was fresh, cold, clean air blowing upon my face. A thought suddenly occurred to me. I looked up.
The ruin I now regarded, judging by the chains strewn around the floor or bolted securely into the walls, had once been a prison, but the sight that was revealed to my eyes no longer resembled such. Ivy made its way from one precipitous edge to the opposite wall, various rocks and loose rubble being mercilessly strangled in its path. A low desolate wall faced north, and there were none to the south and west bar the weathered, blackened rubble which had once formed them. The highest wall was situated to the east, and my vision was limited by its shadow, however, I had no inclination to view anymore of this hell hole as was entirely necessary and due to the fact the main object of my interest was situated in the centre of the floor, I explored no further.
I hesitantly began to walk towards the chest before me but hastily stopped when the birds of prey I had sighted from the ground seemed disconcertingly close. Cautiously, I resumed my walk, a watchful eye on the dangerous scavengers and gained a brief moment of satisfaction when I realised they were rising in the air as I neared, as if wary of me. My concentration could again be wholly focused upon the chest.
As I neared the chest, I noticed it had been imprinted with fine lettering, a poem I presumed. Of lock and key there was no sign and there was no other apparent way to open it, so I directed my attention to the text below the opening seam. I read it aloud:
"When the hour doth come,
Before the ending of the sun,
O one of pure heart,
Unto you I shall open.
"Ah, you are here at last. I have been waiting."
I started as the voice intruded upon my troubled thoughts, and I glanced stupefied in the strangers voice' direction and listened attentively afterwards in case he, for it was a hoarse male voice that I had heard, spoke again. I was rewarded in this, for he said: "I knew you would come, Sylvester, especially after my feat with your house. I was quite impressed too!" he gave a gruff laugh and entered into a coughing fit, which lasted for a surprisingly long time.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
PS. I'm not quite sure how the criteria works for this one, so i just bigged myself up a bit, lol!
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