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Rupert the Rabbit

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08.07.2007 (14.08.2007)

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“I have called my new Rabbit Rusty,” said Rupert.

“My golly,” said Rebecca, “oh well; if you must.”

“My rabbit is rather boring; it just sits their sniffing and chewing lettuce all Day long.” Rupert chuckled.

“That’s funny replied Rebecca, I have a boyfriend and he too chews all day long and he just sits there sniffing; He’s boring too.”

“Well, what name did they give him?” Rupert Asked.

“Well bizarrely enough he’s called Rusty.”

Rupert laughed, “Well they are two of the kind then aren’t they?”

“I shall invite him for tea said Rebecca.”

“Good idea!” replied Rupert; “he will be able to see my rabbit.”

Rebecca tried to explain to Rupert, her boyfriend had been attacked by a

Rottweiller dog and it had made him a little nervous of animals.

“It’s not exactly a Rottweiller though is it?”

“Really was he,” replied Rupert. “Well he doesn’t have to worry because I

Have Already Fed rocky and Rusty the rabbit their dinner and rocky loves his lettuce.”

“Well, what shall we have for our dinner tonight?”

“I know we can cook some Indian food; maybe some curry and rice with a side Salad, rocky the dog and rusty will like that.”


“He’s here,” shouted Rupert!

Rebecca was just adding the final touches to her lipstick, when rusty; her boyfriend barged through the door.

“Would you like to see my rabbit?” shouted Rupert, as he stepped through the door.

Rupert dragged Rebecca and her boyfriend to see the rabbit and her boyfriend soon started to sneeze.

“Are you allergic to rabbits asked Rupert?”

“Not really, only Rottweiller. I think!”

Mean while, eating their curry and side salad and with pink lipstick imprinted

On Rebecca’s lettuce, Rebecca’s boyfriend rusty still kept on sneezing.

Rupert had a thought, “maybe you could be allergic to lettuce, because my

Rabbit sneezes when it’s eating his lettuce.”

“Mind you even our puppy dog sneezes all the time. I will fetch him for you to see.

“Well isn’t it a Rottweiller,” Replied Rusty.

“Yes that’s right said Rupert!”

Rebecca Whispered to Rupert; “I like your boyfriend, he is Very clever Rusty”

“Anyone for more lettuce,” asks Rupert?

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kiss_me2070 14.11.2007 23:40

Very enjoyable, well done.

gizmogizmo 08.07.2007 08:52

Hiya that was great... please let me know if you add to it! Linz x

digitalenvironmentalist 08.07.2007 05:57

funny, but with sense.well done

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