As below, I liked the way you wrote but felt there was just so much more you could have written about this region. Maybe if you have a look at some of the other travel reviews on the site to get a feel for what other consumers find more helpful it would help you expand on your review and get better ratings. I am fairly sure it will be fascinating reading if you could expand upon what you've already written. Please feel free to drop me a line in my guestbook if you update and I'll be happy to come back and reread/rerate as appropriate :) by anonymili

The review was only just helpful. I really liked how you wrote the story however it was not long enough to be of great use to anyone. Work on more description and grammar and you could have some great reviews. Jason. by JJBDude